put together a stakeholders plural, apots i apostrophe. and delete the word "a."ut together stakeholders meetings and sub duty the word "of" for "to." under 7, second line, substitute the word "passed" for the words "voted on." next to last, nine line. staff has not heard from the supervisor, apostrophe s. . it was supervisor that was referred to. and on page 10, under 9, i would delete a second sentence, campaign finance finds. i would delete the word "so." are much higher. and the sonand the opposite is true of the -- i don't know. should that be a capital e or a small e? i will leave it to you, miss boon. and then there's a sentence that begins with executor director relating based on analysis, et cetera, that it will require additional -- i think the word should be "significant." not significan signification. and then what the next steps may be instead of "any." and i would move those amendments to the minutes. commissioner lee, any comments? >> commissioner lee: no. seco nd the motion. >> excuse me, chair chiu. i sected the minutes of the staff and given the