mr. nicholson's ex-wife. it was a very messy divorce. how about changing it to "boom boom"? mr. nicholson suggests "yvonne." that's the name of his present, uh, friend. uh, "yvonne" is fine with us, just fine, right on. [ laughs ] yes, yvonne is very a nice name. we'll change pauline to yvonne. all right, now there's one other tiny thing here on page 60. now, mr. nicholson feels that it would be better if you referred to her as a "dance hall girl." she is what she is. well, mr. nicholson doesn't want to offend the audience. besides, there was some question about his ex-wife, pauline. well, okay, she can become a dance hall girl. that's nice, too. oh, thelma, you've been an angel about this. here we are, ready to celebrate thelma's hit play. oh, thelma! thelma, just a minute. just a minute. if you don't mind, there are just a few more changes. just a few more, dear. now, you know, throughout the play, you use a lot of street language. now, mr. nicholson knows that people talk that way. but he feels that there are some people in the audience who might take offense to it, like his f